I believe it was way too dramatised even for a comedy animation, also too long in my opinion. However, I see that you like what you're doing and you're putting some effort into it, so I think you should keep on animating, you've got something there.
Thanx man! Will definetly work on it!
Not half bad.
Eh, that was actually not half bad! I think you have potential, you're clearly into animating and I believe a bright future awaits you if you continue. Of course it's a long and hard way, but you can make it if you believe in yourself.
The animation itself looked a bit deformed, some of the sounds didn't seem to be dinamic enough and some work on the concept would've really improved the whole project.
I think you should experiment with projects like this more for yourself, and later, when you've developed a greater skill in flash, upload the final product which would be a lot more satisfying to watch, I'm sure.
Long way to go
Well, it's a start, now isn't it?
Yep, It is. Try playing my game Jump Master. I think it's a bit better.
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